Science is the study of God,
and I, with squinted eyes,
studied avidly.
I saw how He molded you
of dust and DNA
and you evolved into a beautiful,
delicate creature of miracle and perfection.
Yet the portrait I had painted of humanity,
geometric and opaque,
was of body, not mind.
Casually blinded by beauty,
I had merely seen your reflection off the glass.
I had forgotten your face, weathered and weary,
turning with hope towards distant horizons.
I had forgotten your soul, hanging delicately like
a gossamer vine of Babylon, and your
confusion as you gazed at me with those inquisitive eyes,
and I, unprepared and unarmed,
delved into the vertigo.
It was not until then I saw that I,
fool that I am,
had been praying for the end of all things
while you
had been praying for the
beginning.















Devious Comments
this line "I had been casually blinded by beauty;" seems awkward to me, too many words I think. Maybe just "casually blinded by beauty" would work better.
the last few lines are lovely, I especially like the spacing, it conveys more emotion.
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